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Elevator Pitch: Show & Tell

Posted by Matt Bertuzzi on Tue, Mar 10, 2009 @ 07:20 AM
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So what do we mean by elevator pitch? And what makes a great one? A quick show & tell.

We have received a ton of entries to our March Madness ‘Elevator Pitch' Contest. Some good, some great & some just plain weird.

I thought I might share what makes a great elevator pitch in my humble opinion.

So what is an elevator pitch from Wikipedia

An elevator pitch is an overview of an idea for a product, service, or project. The name reflects the fact that an elevator pitch can be delivered in the time span of an elevator ride (for example, 30 seconds & 100-150 words).

Also, from the Startup Nation 2009 Contest

You have to convey all the essential information in a clear and concise manner, communicating in a tone that's likeable, passionate, compelling and credible.

While much too long for a traditional elevator pitch, I couldn't resist sharing this with the group. From Salesforce.com an answer to "What is Cloud Computing?"

Would you consider that clear & concise how about compelling? I'd say so.

So please get your team together and enter the contest. There are some great prizes and it will be fun & quite rewarding.  Plus, wouldn't it be interesting to see what your team has been using for an elevator pitch?

Just for fun here is mine:

The Bridge Group works with smart B2B technology companies to build, evolve and validate inside sales strategies. We have figured out how process, tools and technology have converged.  What that means to our clients is increased productivity with a dramatically reduced cost of selling.

Thanks for listening & best of luck!

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Matt, 
It is certainly a clear pitch. No doubt helped by the visual aspect.

posted @ Wednesday, March 11, 2009 8:31 AM by Charles Rich


 
OK, Matt, I've just submitted our elevator pitch. Here it is:  
 
 
"EVERYONE knows someone who needs to improve their English. Who do YOU know?  
 
Anyone who takes one of our Embassy CES English programs to improve their English comes away with 3 very concrete and real benefits. At the end of the program, the learner will:  
 
Number one: speak with more confidence. 
Number two: understand other people better. 
Number three: communicate more professionally in the workplace. 
 
Let me ask you a question. What percentage of customers do you think recommend our English courses to their friends? Go ahead, guess!  
 
Here's the answer: it's 91%. Yes, NINETY ONE PERCENT of our students return to their home countries and recommend an Embassy CES English course to their friends and family back home.  
 
That is powerful evidence that we are doing something right. Would you agree?  
 
So again, to come back to my original question: EVERYONE knows someone who needs to improve their English. Who do YOU know who we should speak to? (And while we're at it, how can I help to refer some business to you?)"
 
 
..................... 
 
 
Come on, judges: you know we have a winner here! :-)  
 
OK, everybody. Let's see some more submissions.  
 
Tom Griffin 
Embassy CES 
Study Group USA 
 
<a>http://www.embassyces.com/promotions/pdftrifolds/index.html 
 
Embassy CES English school Boston  
Tel: 857 362 8970 
 
Embassy CES English school Merrimack  
Tel: 978 837 5300 
 
Embassy CES English school New York 
Tel: 212 629 7300 
 
Embassy CES English school Fort Lauderdale Florida 
Tel: 954 522 8810 
 
Embassy CES English school San Francisco 
Tel: 415 447 9014 
 
Embassy CES English school San Diego 
Tel: 619 235 9222 
 
Embassy CES English school Los Angeles 
Tel: 562 606 1580 
 
Embassy CES English school Seattle-Tacoma 
Tel: 253 535 8660 
 

posted @ Wednesday, March 11, 2009 12:28 PM by Tom Griffin


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